TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Sora no Otoshimono [Timed]
Workraw: Sora no Otoshimono Final Eternal My Master (BD 1280x720 AVC AAC)

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NOTE: There are numerous occasions where Master is left untranslated. I'll leave this decision to the Editor (you can hear them say 'masutaa')
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also, mackerel, synapse, astraea, patience

1
Dialogue: 0,0:00:56.66,0:00:57.57,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What was that?
Dialogue: 0,0:00:56.66,0:00:57.57,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What happened?
*just giving an alternative*

3
Dialogue: 0,0:01:00.63,0:01:04.48,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,All right, Nymph, \Nhurry up and return
Dialogue: 0,0:01:00.63,0:01:04.48,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,All right! Come on Nymph, hurry up and return!
*don't see a reason for line split. Also, saa was left untranslated*

4
Dialogue: 0,0:01:05.61,0:01:07.42,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Don't tell me!
Dialogue: 0,0:01:05.61,0:01:07.42,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,H-Hey... don't tell me!
*missing hesitation*

5
Dialogue: 0,0:01:13.59,0:01:15.13,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,After all of that...
Dialogue: 0,0:01:13.59,0:01:15.13,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Take me there...
*tsureteike : he cuts off and completes the same sentence in line 6"

7
Dialogue: 0,0:01:18.76,0:01:20.93,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Zues has been destroyed.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:18.76,0:01:20.93,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,There's no more sign of Zeus, right?!
*it's missing the "right?" in this case*

14
Dialogue: 0,0:01:48.08,0:01:55.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,One spring long ago, under your command, \NI attacked other human beings.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:48.08,0:01:55.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,A long time ago, under the Sky Master's command, I attacked the humans on land.
*haruka was mistranslated as spring(haru)*

15
Dialogue: 0,0:01:55.40,0:01:58.34,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I understand, \Nbut I ordered you to do so.
Dialogue: 0,0:01:55.40,0:01:58.34,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I know, \Nbut you were ordered you to do so, weren't you?
*it wasn't tomoki who made that order*

17
Dialogue: 0,0:02:00.12,0:02:01.21,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Just worry about the present.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:00.12,0:02:01.21,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Just focus on getting to-
*he says But for now, let's go to the Synapse, but he's cut off by Ikaros*

18
Dialogue: 0,0:02:01.21,0:02:03.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Those circumstances destroyed an entire city.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:01.21,0:02:03.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,After causing massive destruction across the land,
*this sounds way more natural and fitting to the Japanese counterpart*

19
Dialogue: 0,0:02:03.93,0:02:06.96,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I naturally malfuctioned.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:03.93,0:02:06.96,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I suddenly malfunctioned.
*totsuzen: suddenly*

20
Dialogue: 0,0:02:12.80,0:02:17.18,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I just happened to find\N a human boy who ordered me
Dialogue: 0,0:02:12.80,0:02:17.18,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,But then, a human boy who had happened to find me,

21
Dialogue: 0,0:02:18.75,0:02:22.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,to attack the synapse.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:18.75,0:02:22.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,ordered me to counterattack Synapse instead.
*Synapse is a name* *put counter there for flavour, edit however you like*
*the boy finds the girl, not vice versa*

25
Dialogue: 0,0:02:34.70,0:02:35.25,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Now.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:34.70,0:02:35.25,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,But for now...!
*way more tense*

29
Dialogue: 0,0:02:47.52,0:02:49.19,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That time... Senpai...
Dialogue: 0,0:02:47.52,0:02:49.19,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's like that time... with Senpai...

31
Dialogue: 0,0:02:52.94,0:03:01.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The Nymph, Astrea, and the harpies \Nstopped me after a long fight.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:52.94,0:03:01.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Nymph, Astraea, and the harpies \Nstopped me after a long fight.
*names*

32
Dialogue: 0,0:03:01.29,0:03:10.13,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I was the strongest angeloid at the time and \Ndevastated the synapse, leaving nothing in it's wake.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:01.29,0:03:10.13,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,However, I was the strongest angeloid at the time and \Ndevastated Synapse, leaving almost nothing in it's wake.

33
Dialogue: 0,0:03:11.20,0:03:16.48,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,They couldn't stop my onslaught, \Nso the knights of the snapyse, installed a certain device
Dialogue: 0,0:03:11.20,0:03:16.48,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The Knights of Synapse, unable of stopping my onslaught, installed a certain device into my core...
34
Dialogue: 0,0:03:17.16,0:03:21.11,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,to my reactor... to the core of my variable wings.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:17.16,0:03:21.11,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,... into the core of my variable wings.

41
Dialogue: 0,0:03:38.21,0:03:41.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I don't know what you've been through...
Dialogue: 0,0:03:38.21,0:03:41.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,As always I can never predict what you'll do next...
*strange way to translate this context heavy line*

45
Dialogue: 0,0:04:01.37,0:04:04.55,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The entire Earth will vanish  as well it's atmosphere.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:01.37,0:04:04.55,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The entire Earth will vanish as well as its atmosphere.

49
Dialogue: 0,0:04:16.09,0:04:22.73,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,If I take you to the synapse now, \Nno one will be able to get near it.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:16.09,0:04:22.73,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,If I don't take you to Synapse now, \Nno one will ever be able to get near it.
*missing negative*

51 53 *are pejoratives needed?*

60
Dialogue: 0,0:04:47.63,0:04:56.79,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}Ever since the day master picked me up, \NEvery day, Every second, I make him blissful.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:47.63,0:04:56.79,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}Ever since the day Master picked me up, \NEvery day, every second of every minute, I was in bliss.
*ikaros is the subject*

61
Dialogue: 0,0:04:57.99,0:05:04.03,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}He was fine with me making mistakes. \NHe told me I'm fine as is.
Dialogue: 0,0:04:57.99,0:05:04.03,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}Whenever you told me to not act like a weapon. \NWhenever you told me everything's fine despite me being a weapon.
*heiki in this situation = weapon*

66
Dialogue: 0,0:05:17.51,0:05:18.91,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Are you even listening?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:17.51,0:05:18.91,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Didn't I tell you this before?!
*same as last time, a cut off sentence gets completed next line*
67
Dialogue: 0,0:05:18.91,0:05:22.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Didn't I say to stay by my side that time?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:18.91,0:05:22.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Didn't I tell to stay by my side that time?
(this was the serious part of the plot, see chapter 76/77 of the manga (the end))

89
Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.50,0:07:07.71,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hey, Chimiko!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.50,0:07:07.71,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hey there, little girl!
*I think he's saying chibikko since her name is chaos*

92
Dialogue: 0,0:07:10.28,0:07:11.57,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hey, Tamaki.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:10.28,0:07:11.57,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hey, Tomoki.

100
Dialogue: 0,0:07:30.72,0:07:33.32,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That hurt, Onee-chan, that hurt.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:30.72,0:07:33.32,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Does it hurt? Onee-chan, are you in pain?
101
Dialogue: 0,0:07:33.32,0:07:34.97,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Is that a date?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:33.32,0:07:34.97,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Is that what a date means?
*she's not the subject of the suffering, she's observing and thinking about what a date actually is*

108
Dialogue: 0,0:08:10.29,0:08:12.51,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}The power within my reactor hurts again.
Dialogue: 0,0:08:10.29,0:08:12.51,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}Again, this piercing pain in my core.
*think as in heart = core <3*

122
{animal cosplay}
{animal rollplay}
*actually abbreviated "play"  like this usually refers to rollplaying. I guess it works both ways in this context however*
(technically the word fetish would also be applicable)

156
Dialogue: 0,0:11:02.12,0:11:04.96,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We shouldn't be outside.
Dialogue: 0,0:11:02.12,0:11:04.96,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Don't want to stay outside in the heat for too long.
*this is the context included*

186
Dialogue: 0,0:12:32.81,0:12:34.66,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, I uhh...
Dialogue: 0,0:12:32.81,0:12:34.66,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, I...
187
Dialogue: 0,0:12:36.88,0:12:38.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Do you have a reason?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:36.88,0:12:38.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Do you have a reason to hide it?
*more context needed in English*

190
Dialogue: 0,0:12:49.73,0:12:51.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's something about you.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:49.73,0:12:51.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's all up to you.

191
Dialogue: 0,0:12:51.29,0:12:56.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,If it's true, you will settle things yourself \Nwith Synapse before that happens.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:51.29,0:12:56.29,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,In the case he asks you to, you will settle things yourself \Nwith Synapse before that happens.
*this is how the conversation flows*

193
Dialogue: 0,0:12:59.72,0:13:00.76,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's the truth.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:59.72,0:13:00.76,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Let's face it.
*this is the context of jijitsu, could be combined with 194*

213
Dialogue: 0,0:14:12.58,0:14:14.81,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Eh-kun, you can't do that.
Dialogue: 0,0:14:12.58,0:14:14.81,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ei-kun, you can't do that.
*look up (official) names before working on a title helps a lot*

218
Dialogue: 0,0:14:27.22,0:14:29.89,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I don't think she would lie about that.
Dialogue: 0,0:14:27.22,0:14:29.89,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Perhaps that's why she's hiding it from us.
*actually she says "that's why she's telling us a lie", so you have to treat this sentence reversed*

247~
Dialogue: 0,0:16:13.19,0:16:14.65,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I see.
Dialogue: 0,0:16:13.19,0:16:14.65,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,My god...

Dialogue: 0,0:16:14.65,0:16:17.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This world...
Dialogue: 0,0:16:14.65,0:16:17.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That means that this world...

Dialogue: 0,0:16:17.10,0:16:21.75,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, the world continuum that was \Nconcurrently on the chain with all the pasts.
Dialogue: 0,0:16:17.10,0:16:21.75,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, all the worlds in the time space continuum that are created due to the parallel chains of the past.
*this is quite a hard to comprehend sentence*
(subete no kakorensa ni heikou shite dekita renzokutaijikuu sekai )

284
Dialogue: 0,0:18:01.53,0:18:03.83,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What happened to my cake?!
Dialogue: 0,0:18:01.53,0:18:03.83,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's gone! What happened to my cake?!
*missed the nai*

311
Dialogue: 0,0:19:05.40,0:19:09.30,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I know. I might be a bit different from Ikaros-chan.
Dialogue: 0,0:19:05.40,0:19:09.30,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I know. I might be a bit different from Ikaros-chan and the rest.
*plural, so this should be like this.*

358
Dialogue: 0,0:21:40.04,0:21:43.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This place is pretty active.
Dialogue: 0,0:21:40.04,0:21:43.86,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I didn't think this place would become so lively.

361
Dialogue: 0,0:21:48.69,0:21:52.79,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Are you a resident of \NTomoki-onee-chan's house as well, Ikaros-san?
Dialogue: 0,0:21:48.69,0:21:52.79,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Are you a resident of \NTomoki-onii-chan's house as well, Ikaros-san?
*edit might still be needed, but tomoki is definitely a guy*

379
Dialogue: 0,0:22:43.36,0:22:45.05,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Bring the impriting here!
Dialogue: 0,0:22:43.36,0:22:45.05,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Remove the imprinting!
*wrong verb. toku -> solve/remove*

445
Dialogue: 0,0:25:48.02,0:25:50.38,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,wait Sonohara-san, anything but that!
Dialogue: 0,0:25:48.02,0:25:50.38,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Wait Sohara-san, anything but that!

465 
Dialogue: 0,0:27:04.60,0:27:07.80,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Welcome to Tomoki's flight.
Dialogue: 0,0:27:04.60,0:27:07.80,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Welcome to "See Tomoki By Train".
*it's a pun on sekain no shasou kara, See The World By Train, a Japanese tv series*

475
Dialogue: 0,0:27:38.17,0:27:40.18,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Our first stop is the fist station.
Dialogue: 0,0:27:38.17,0:27:40.18,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Behold, the first stop.
*less confusing*

534
535
Dialogue: 0,0:31:01.53,0:31:04.56,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ladies, I wonder if you'll get that it's...
Dialogue: 0,0:31:05.16,0:31:08.84,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,the one sided thing called love?
--> He's not saying it in double negative, but negative + questioning. So basically: 
"Ladies, I wonder if you have come to understand...
...that love doesn't come from just one side."
(this gets repeated in 559 as "Ladies, love doesn't come from just one side.")

505 
I guess this is "fujo shiin" = relief scene. So I guess the context fits fine enough.

548
Dialogue: 0,0:32:05.15,0:32:08.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Since the angeloids can't use the gates of the game.
Dialogue: 0,0:32:05.15,0:32:08.40,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Since the angeloids can't use the gates of the Dive Game.
*it was never referred before in this movie*

576
Dialogue: 0,0:34:16.71,0:34:20.94,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ikaros-senpai, so we brought ingredients to make breakfast with.
Dialogue: 0,0:34:16.71,0:34:20.94,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ikaros-senpai's no longer here, so we brought ingredients to make breakfast with.
*translation had some missing parts*

586
Dialogue: 0,0:34:39.15,0:34:41.75,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Nypmh, what are in those things?
Dialogue: 0,0:34:39.15,0:34:41.75,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Nymph, what did you put into that food?
*alternative I guess*

587
{very effective, purging}
(As noun, I'd just say laxative)

678
Dialogue: 0,0:39:03.10,0:39:06.47,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}But... But it's Ikaros...
Dialogue: 0,0:39:03.10,0:39:06.47,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\i1}But... But if so, Ikaros...
*changed the context a bit *

720
Dialogue: 0,0:41:06.21,0:41:11.77,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,For someone who wants to be bound \Nby the person they love, who doesn't even realize
Dialogue: 0,0:41:06.21,0:41:11.77,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,For someone who doesn't even realize that there are girls who want to be bound to the person they like voluntarily.
*I don;t think this sentence needs timing splitting*
*The context is reversed*

730
Dialogue: 0,0:41:43.19,0:41:44.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It doesn't matter?
Dialogue: 0,0:41:43.19,0:41:44.10,Stock Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This is going too far!
*corrected the context. might have to be cut off because he is interrupted*